How could someone hate this? It was really beautiful, and your language was gorgeous. I had a lot of fun reading it.

Wow. This story is amazing. Your detail and imagery and deep character explorations astound me.

This is such a magnificent piece.

Great story! Julien was very interesting and the way you presented his story kept it interesting as well.

There's the usual small grammar errors that were probably missed upon editing, but the ideas behind the story are sound. Definitely look forward to reading some of your other stuff sometime.

How can you write like this? How?

As always, the writing is exquisite, the characters are compelling, the plot . . . leaves me begging for more.

In this case, though, I think maybe you ended it right where you meant to, with unresolve and formless angst all over the place.

I hated how good this was damn it

But rly . Fucking hell. I go tvo write you a retview and ym laptvop is like lol no I'll fuCK WIth your letters!

Anyway. I punched it. It is somewhat bettver. OH FUCKING HELL. Anyway. I like the little details in this. I think the little details really make it - really add on to it. I'd be more giving instead of how I usually am when it comes to anything, but once again, I fail at exPRESSING..EJESUS CHRIST. FUCKING KEYMBOARD. OKAY I QUITV AND I LOVTED THIS AS ALWAYS.