The art/frustration of writing poetry. I know that struggle well and I think you did a really good job of describing what it's like trying to get a poem down on paper. I know I've done the same- cross out lines, trash whole pieces of work that don't sound or read right to me. Awesome poem- great job.

That was a fantastic poem, flowed perfectly and was better than anything I could do! I'm a terrible poet :) Good job

It's the same for me sometimes.

"Each word a life" -I love that line! :D

I liked this a lot. I think anyone who writes poems has been here- tired, late at night, dawn's breaking, you hate everything you've wrote so far. good job!

It was really good! Chocolate Chip Cookie for you!