Awesome new chapter! This looks like it's going to be an amazing story and I can't wait for a new chapter! I really like Juliet! She's such a cool character, and I love Angel the dog too!

The boys seem really cool characters, and I love how you've described them! You're amazing at descriptive writing!

All I can say is a perfect story and keep up the good work...and hopefully soon! :-D

Wow! This story is amazing! It's really descriptive - I could really picture the room in my mind! Also, I could really empathise with Juliet (love the character's name btw)! It's absolutely fantastic!

100% perfect! Well done! Then again, I can never expect anything less from my favourite FictionPress writer! Awesome!