I like that it takes a moment to realize that the "loser" ends up with the warm heart.

Aww, I've missed your bitter puns! Your poems always sound so cynical and desperately in love at the same time :)

Where've you BEEN all this time?

i think its terrific. its amazing how you can say so much in seventeen syllables. :)

Interesting. Makes me wonder and imagine the relationship in question.