Wow the story about the little girl was amazing. I was reading it on break at work and let's just say I didn't quite make it back on time. She was very scary. Movie material, it would make a great "Tales from the Crypt."

... This story is so creepily awesome. I will forever avoid sewing needles now. Keep it up!

Dude. This is great. This is why I always avoided sewing needles.

As I expected, awesome.

There was a spelling mistake, though - that's all their was. I thik you meant there. Also there was something about men and white, and I think you meant men IN white. very minor mistakes, though, so hardly a big deal.

I have been sucked into your story after reading the prologue. Children, you say? Plus an asylum? Instant entertainment.

One spelling mistake - our instead of 'Out medical staff'

I love this. It's creepy. Please, please don't stop. There is nothing more disturbing than children in horror stories...

omg shes not going to sew humans is she?

I really like the idea of this story! great work :)

Great story! :) Hope you post a new chapter soon!

Keep em comin! :)

Can't resist a story about a mental hospital. D

Well written. I only found two spelling mistakes.

favility is "facility".

patients are will cared for should be "patients are well cared for".

I really like the prologue :).

There are some spelling errors in the first chapter, though, but I like the format of it; the way you aligned everything differently seemed to have a bigger impact.

Very interesting. Can't really say much else since there's very little to actually comment about; but keep it up.