Hey, Nicky. :D

I really loved the tone in this. It was so sad, but heartfelt at the same time. I could feel the emotions in this, and can relate, to some degree.

I also like how you took a simple saying, and reversed it. :D That was really clever. :P

I really, really liked the descriptions and the imagery in this as well. :D

I loved the last line. It was really poignant. :)

Very well done! :)

Avid. :D

"I believe,

He believes this a mercy."

Wow? I wish I could favourite those lines by themselves, they stand out to me so much! I guess I've been looking for a way to put this thought for a long time.

This poem really echoes how I'm feeling right now.. and I hope there is some truth in it.

This is a new way of looking at Romeo and Julliet. As often as I've thought of them as star-crossed lovers, it never occurred to me that they could be uncrossed. "Not meant to be because we are meant to be/and this is a world of always leaving."-very nicely put.

I like how you compared, Stars and the sky into feelings and people. Nice job. I cant seem to do that .