|Reviews for Iridescent|
| Open your eyes Chopstick 7/31/10 . chapter 1
i liked the rhymes! it's a very well written poem. My favorite lines are "And when you hold me in your arms,
You hug the sands of time." I thought it was a nice image.
if you would like to, feel free to read my poems as well. I would love to hear what you think about them. :)