|Reviews for Dangerous Desires|
| Mikey DenDang 9/6/10 . chapter 4
I am loving the sotry so far, I find that I can really relate to Ethan minus the emo-scene look. I love it so much, I am bery excited for the next chapter.
| plumblossom 9/6/10 . chapter 4
Ethan is an idiot, and he's embarked on a course that is really quite cruel to everyone involved, including, of course, himself, especially when he realizes what he's doing.
Nicjk doesn't deserve this and apparently Sran doesn't either, but Ethan seems to.
| do not click 9/6/10 . chapter 4
i like this story, you shouldnt listen to the negitive losers! this chapter was good, sean is kind of sweet, but the whole angry attitude makes me like him more :) hope you update soon!
| Criminal Behaviour 9/6/10 . chapter 4
GAH, don't listen to negative people. They're just jealous that they aren't as awesome at drama-ing up a story as you are.
But without further adieu, I'll get to the review! (Hey, that sorta rhymed! :D)
I loved the little texting bit. "Maybe :)" Haha, that's something like what I would say. ;D
Also, Sean is awesome, even if he's an a**hole. x3 I love his word choices. "Lightweight, not anorexic." BAHAHA! That reminds me of Rucka Rucka Ali's parody of Paparazzi—"Emo Like a Nazi." I won't get into that, though, lol. Don't wanna cause problems...
(And also, Sean being all protective and jealous is pretty adorable, XD.)
| MyWeirdWorld 9/6/10 . chapter 4
Just so you know: I love your story! I honestly don't know why people would give you negativ feedback. So okay, maybe you like cliché stuff, but you always write it in an original way, so it isn't boring to read. There's a reason why people still read cliché stories... duh! It's fun to read when someone brings it in an original way!
Lol, the wrestling-thingy was hilarious xD Ethan in a jeopard-thingy... xD
Ohh and just don't quite writing this thing! I love reading your stories!
P.S. Sorry for the sucky English xD It was (for me) a long review, so I probably made a few mistakes here and there ;)
| xfireworkzstarx 9/6/10 . chapter 4
GAH I really hate that whole using thing. But it does seem to be working
AS LONG AS IT'S NOT REAL LIFE XD I think that's what people have to understand- the whole FICTION part of it...yaknow...the whole thing xD
I'm glad that Sean's opening up and I don't think he's too abusive really, I do however get annoyed if it carries on for a long time (there's a very fine line between abusive and the typical boy-like-someone-so-tease-them kinda thing).
Nate seems just to be a little puppy *big eyes*
He just wants a boyfriend *tawhh*
I really think the wrestling thing is funny xD Gosh, how random, haha. Maybe it'll help later sometime though...
But getting that up close and personal is pretty damn good. Hah.
Update real soon!
| darkfey311 9/6/10 . chapter 4
very nice. good story twist, and you can just tell that sean has feeling for ethan, but he cant see it! ahh. keep up the good work
| toinfinity 9/4/10 . chapter 3
I still can't get over how different Sean seems now, when we acrually get to see him a lot. Its interesting. And yes, it is only the third chapter, but I already love Ethan.
Yup. Ive made up my mind!
: ) Anyway, update as soon as you can! You're writing is amazing, and it always leaves me wondering whats going to happen next!
| words with bite 9/4/10 . chapter 3
Very interesting story you got going on. I love Ethan's bluntness. It's actually really refreshing. I hope there is going to be some serious drama among the three. Nice job!
| Torah Cabernet 9/3/10 . chapter 3
As I type this, I would like you to realize that I officially have no soul left. Thank you, freshman year. Thank you, gifted school. Thank you, Algebra II.
Anyways. It's Friday. It's a miracle. Honestly, the only time I ever get to read anymore is on the weekends, late at night after I've finished all my work. Honestly, we just finished our second week of school and already I've done and still yet have enough work to build an entire house out of paper. Believe me, this is a nice little break.
Although I am sick now, and my ears, which are all full of fluid, hurt a lot. It definitely dampens the reading experience when you're worried about dropping dead any second.
But anyway, it's nice to see a new, good update. WHY DOES HE HAVE TO DATE NICK? why must he be so jealous! When is Sean going to smarten up and just ask him out?
I think I'm going to go sleep now. I haven't in fifteen hours.
| Irrevocably In Love 9/2/10 . chapter 3
UGH EW! i dont like the ethan/nick pairing! ew! but cant wait for next chapter:D
| emobunny 9/2/10 . chapter 3
hi! i missed you did u miss me? wel since im such a dedicated reviewer i thought that i must review(even though i was waiting for a long while) and here i am! lol well i dont know about my feelings for nick and i have to see their relationship progress more to really get a feel for him. for now i think hes really really sweet but he hides it by his cocky bastard atittudeness. ethan. hm. hes very scheming and his plans are working right now but what happens if he falls for nick? hehehe. i know its not going to happen but cant a girl dream? sean is as adorable as always but totally stupid. question, when will we meet ethans parents? im pretty sure we havent but, hey, i have a bad memory.
| That Weird Cat Lady 9/2/10 . chapter 3
BAH! none of this Nick/Ethan shit! i want Sean/Ethan! please start posting more often cuz i'd love to read more!
| Criminal Behaviour 9/2/10 . chapter 3
Haha, cute little chapter. Paves the way for some very potential drama-i-ness down the line. ;) And as for the pictures, the funny thing is, you really could've picked pretty much any generic emo kid for Ethan, seeing as there seem to be so gosh darned many of them on teh interwebz. XD
| plumblossom 9/1/10 . chapter 3
So it's likje an extra-dimensional triangle, huh? That's exciting!