Awesome It really gives you a picture of what's happening. Great work I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really like the way this story is going! I like a little bit of magic- or should i say majik- here and there.

one thing though. I felt that you rushed through the scene where claudia came and got December a bit too fast. Maybe there should've been more questions asked by December, maybe. Or her sister's could've said a little something.

Anyway, i love it! please continue it!

And i pass the hot potato onward to you.

turn-towards-the-light.