|Reviews for Finding Grey Revised|
| Istalri 2/17/11 . chapter 19
This has been one of my favorite chapters as well! I actually like that Maggie didn't know how to make a bed. It's something so small, but important at the same time. I enjoyed seeing how she made a friend through it. Great chapter!
| Brackynn 2/16/11 . chapter 19
Grace is back! Yay! :)
I love the little part where Maggie struggles with the bed-making, and how she still hasn't quite perfected it after her first try. I think it's a very nice little reminder of her roots and also of how far she's come. I also like your opening paragraphs describing Maggie's journey from London to France and the whole new world she's in now ... exciting stuff!
| Istalri 2/14/11 . chapter 18
Oo, now things are really picking up! This was a good chapter. You really showed the new person Maggie's become. She's not only more kind and caring, but more independent as well. She doesn't need her posh friends or her rich parents. I'm really excited to see what will happen next!
| C.F. Anne 2/13/11 . chapter 18
LeenElle! Remember me? *sheepish grin* lol. It's been so long since I've read your stories, and let me say, I'm proud see that you've been constantly writing! This Finding Grey revision is WONDERFUL and has made me miss your work all the more. Each and every chapter was amazing and I find Maggie's change so believable. The only comment is that you sometimes use "Sarah" instead of "Sara". But, Pfft, that's miniscule compared to how much I enjoy this overall. Oh, and when I have time, your other novels are on my list to read! You should be hearing more from me soon, especially in the months to come, with summer around the corner. Good luck with this revision and with your other stories!
| STARLIGHT2267 2/10/11 . chapter 18
this is awsome
| sunshineinabagg 2/8/11 . chapter 18
this is really really good :D
I love how you portrayed the changes in Maggie as well as Grey.
I really think this story is coming along nicely, and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Brackynn 2/8/11 . chapter 18
I love this version! I wish this was a real printed novel so I could turn the page and keep reading! I'm so excited about Maggie finally going off to France. Such a dramatic chapter - grim, but hopeful. Can't wait for the next update!
| Brackynn 1/23/11 . chapter 17
Wow ... what an intense chapter. And such a change of mood from anything else so far in this story. It feels like the war has suddenly become "real", and some truly horrible blows are being dealt, which makes me desperately want to keep on reading!
I am absolutely loving this rewrite :)
| Roselle 1/20/11 . chapter 17
I really liked your chapter. I just have one question. I thought that Grey was a doctor, yet you have him fighting in the trenches. I have done research on World War I too, and I can't recall doctors fighting in the trenches. There were hospitals close to the front, but I didn't hear of doctors fighting. If you didn't mean Grey to serve as a doctor then you must clear that up. Otherwise, very great job!
| SingingBird812 1/19/11 . chapter 17
Oh my goodness was this chapter amazing! I was literally holding my breath at parts. The intensity was perfect, as were the descriptions. You gave such a good picture of what they were dealing with without making it too gory, which was nice.
| Brackynn 1/6/11 . chapter 16
I bet that was a letter Grey never expected he's get from Maggie! But I agree with Mrs Mansfield - it's so wonderful to read about Maggie and Sara interacting. They're so adorable together. And Maggie not caring about her bloodstained dress? Very impressive turnabout for her!
| STARLIGHT2267 12/31/10 . chapter 15
awsome wtite more
| Brackynn 12/27/10 . chapter 15
Sigh! This is such a heart-warming chapter - it's so touching to see Maggie really and truly experiencing the joys of selflessness for its own sake. And Sara (as always) is just too cute! I did like that it wasn't all happy fluff with Sara's coughing fits being a reminder of the reality of the situation and why such a special party would mean so much to everybody. Lovely work!
| SingingBird812 12/11/10 . chapter 14
This was one of the sweetest things I've ever read! I love how you're developing the characters.
| Brackynn 12/10/10 . chapter 14
Take that, Grey Mansfield! What a perfectly lovely letter from Maggie - even if it's only a little bit, I love that it challenges his stubborn attitude towards her.
And oh, Teddy ... he is utterly adorable. Why do I get the feeling that his correspondence with Amelia might be the start of something more than just a penpal friendship...? ;) I sure hope so, at any rate!
Very sweet and touching chapter. Awesome work!