Great start, haven't read chapter 3 yet but I will surely get around to it.

Beck is a very strong character the only confusing thing is the change of pov's.

the first chapter in beck's pov was really good.

update soon :)

"God, their daughter is so creepy and gross."

"Weston!" She chasties, but I know she knows I'm right. "Now get your lazy ass up!"

I comply and we walk out and I find Weston making Dacey laugh. Oh. now we can't have this happening, now can we?

-she calls him Weston..when that's his brothers name.. It should be "Beck!" She chastises

I like it, personally. Though it seems like a person of Dacey's personality might have turned to violence by now... ;D It's quite well-done. I enjoy Beck's character immensely, and can't wait to read more.