rofl that's great!

Hopefully he decides to do it lol

update soon (:

I really like this!

Can't wait to see where you go with it.

update soon (:

hey i havnt read it all due to the length of it, but so far so good. its your first one u said, right? well you're off to a good start. i noticed a bit of a parallel, nothing major at all, but u said that the guy with golden eyes found him "last night", but then said hed been out for two days. just figured i shud let u know.