|Reviews for grass|
| HighOnBrokenWings 8/6/10 . chapter 1
Those first four lines were the best, in my opinion.
"The curves of my hips,
the path of your spine,
your weathered hand
inching closer towards mine."
Just to remind you of what they were. It flowed so amazingly from one word to the next, painted an amazing picture, and was just plain amazing :D