Haha!

'The fat lady sings'

*giggles* Nice line:D I suppose that's mostly true in opera, since my music teacher once told me that bigger size people were more able to project their voices without the aid of microphones:D

The last line made me giggle . Nice way to end it.

Good haiku. It's easy to tell that you are a music lover, even if you hadn't said so.

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The last line was really, great I think. It added to the whole topic, but at the same time added a bit of humor to the piece that it otherwise might not have had. In fact, I like the topic you’ve chosen for this haiku. It isn’t something you would normally see, and that uniqueness is a great thing to find. You also executed the delivery quite nicely, which is always a good thing.

Well, I can't think of too much to say other than: I loved it! Haiku's are always nice poems. The last line was amusing. I feel like it added a deeper meaning but you said it was just for kicks. It was good though. Good work!

Marina M.

Author of: The Death Deities

Is there some sort of prejudice in this write? I somewhat feel there is lol.

'fat' just feels negative. If it was other words like 'plump', it wouldn't feel like you were directly pointing a finger at them.

it does feel calm though (even if there seems to be a hint of prejudice).