|Reviews for The Fourteenth Floor|
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 5
| Ray 11/6/11 . chapter 5
I'm really quite sad you haven't updated this story in such a long time seeing as it is one of the few stories I desperately want to know more about. I hope you haven't given up on it and that you'll be inspired to write the next chapter soon.
| Colocho 2/5/11 . chapter 5
I'm liking this story a lot :D can't wait to read what's next, also can't wait for the slash to kick in XD
| Poptart Guava King 1/9/11 . chapter 5
*starts singing random theme song* CAUSE ASTRAL PROJECTION IS COOL. I'm guessing there's going to be an information chapter sometime soon, explaining how his powers work, that I will most likely skim because my attention span can't focus on info chapters. xD glad to see an update. I love Louis. Just, all the time. I think it's cause of his hair and his dog and the fact that he picked a lock with his finger. btw "but I can show you all you need to know." had me squealing cause honestly, my mind is always in the gutter. :D
| xfireworkzstarx 1/9/11 . chapter 5
I wonder what his training is! I love fics along the lines of this (: Though, this isn't a cliché fic there's some good original ideas in there which I hope you develop.
Anyways, I hope you don't leave it so long between updates again D: I forget what I'm reading and the scenes lost their impact D:
I think the idea of astral projection and soul retrieval could be a really good key for adding some good decription in the future and I'm also expecting to come accross the evil guy soon! Savael or whatever he's called ;)
Update real soon!
| littleanemonefish 1/5/11 . chapter 4
I've decided that I love your writing. I really haven't read anything this good in a long time. The story is very unique and it seems to be developing at a very good speed. The only sad thing is that I didn't stumble upon it in a completed state, but I don't mind waiting for more of something so great.
| SeveRemus 10/17/10 . chapter 4
Hi! I like where this story is headed. I understand about school taking "precedence" (not "precedent") but am looking forward to your updates.
May I also offer my services as a Beta/proofreader? You're a very good writer, so it makes me cringe to see the few mistakes that you do have. I think you have the potential to become a truly great writer - otherwise, I wouldn't bother. Let me know.
| Esquirella 10/14/10 . chapter 4
| AnonBonBon 10/9/10 . chapter 4
This is fantastic. And. Yeah.
| Brittany-Dawud 9/30/10 . chapter 4
Bones! Your back! I'm so happy. Thank you for gracing us with another update. Your amazing as usual.
| Poptart Guava King 9/30/10 . chapter 4
yay new chappy makes me smile. :) anywho, poor Christian. so confused.
| cinq-a-sept 8/24/10 . chapter 3
I seriously love Christian! But I like Louis more. This chapter really great and i love the titles that you choose. They're so intriguing! So they cool ability! Elva has fire. I take it Louis some cutting ability or something... I wonder what Claudia can do.
See you around on the next update!
| Poptart Guava King 8/22/10 . chapter 3
rofl. he got kidnapped. hahahaha. oh... :D I was so happy to see this chapter alert in my inbox.
| AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist 8/15/10 . chapter 2
I really like this so far!
(sorry for the completely bland review. It's 3am and i'm too lazy to go into detail. BUT next chapter I'll give you a better one!)
| Poptart Guava King 8/15/10 . chapter 2
YAY! Story! I like it alot so far. I'm looking forward to the rest. lol I think I like Christian.