interesting

I'm really quite sad you haven't updated this story in such a long time seeing as it is one of the few stories I desperately want to know more about. I hope you haven't given up on it and that you'll be inspired to write the next chapter soon.

I'm liking this story a lot :D can't wait to read what's next, also can't wait for the slash to kick in XD

*starts singing random theme song* CAUSE ASTRAL PROJECTION IS COOL. I'm guessing there's going to be an information chapter sometime soon, explaining how his powers work, that I will most likely skim because my attention span can't focus on info chapters. xD glad to see an update. I love Louis. Just, all the time. I think it's cause of his hair and his dog and the fact that he picked a lock with his finger. btw "but I can show you all you need to know." had me squealing cause honestly, my mind is always in the gutter. :D

How intriguing!

I wonder what his training is! I love fics along the lines of this (: Though, this isn't a cliché fic there's some good original ideas in there which I hope you develop.

Anyways, I hope you don't leave it so long between updates again D: I forget what I'm reading and the scenes lost their impact D:

I think the idea of astral projection and soul retrieval could be a really good key for adding some good decription in the future and I'm also expecting to come accross the evil guy soon! Savael or whatever he's called ;)

Update real soon!

MOARNAO

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I've decided that I love your writing. I really haven't read anything this good in a long time. The story is very unique and it seems to be developing at a very good speed. The only sad thing is that I didn't stumble upon it in a completed state, but I don't mind waiting for more of something so great.

Hi! I like where this story is headed. I understand about school taking "precedence" (not "precedent") but am looking forward to your updates.

May I also offer my services as a Beta/proofreader? You're a very good writer, so it makes me cringe to see the few mistakes that you do have. I think you have the potential to become a truly great writer - otherwise, I wouldn't bother. Let me know.

Cool plot!

This is fantastic. And. Yeah.

Bones! Your back! I'm so happy. Thank you for gracing us with another update. Your amazing as usual.

yay new chappy makes me smile. :) anywho, poor Christian. so confused.

I seriously love Christian! But I like Louis more. This chapter really great and i love the titles that you choose. They're so intriguing! So they cool ability! Elva has fire. I take it Louis some cutting ability or something... I wonder what Claudia can do.

See you around on the next update!

rofl. he got kidnapped. hahahaha. oh... :D I was so happy to see this chapter alert in my inbox.

I really like this so far!

:D

(sorry for the completely bland review. It's 3am and i'm too lazy to go into detail. BUT next chapter I'll give you a better one!)

YAY! Story! I like it alot so far. I'm looking forward to the rest. lol I think I like Christian.