|Reviews for Chill Pill|
| S.J. Byrd 3/19/13 . chapter 9
Oh wow, this is just such an awesome story! I'm seriously so hooked! I love your writing style and I really can't wait to see where you take these characters! Update soon!
| tenna shut up 1/31/13 . chapter 4
I don't know... they are just the cutest! I really like the three of them. Each different, all quite charming. Well-written. Awesome banter. The details and background just right. Reading this just puts a smile on face all through out. :)
| HiHelloMisterBear 1/24/13 . chapter 9
Love Dave. And Ben.
He is just so stinking proper. Like sit up straight and drink with his pinky up proper.
| stuck in bed 1/21/13 . chapter 1
Hi! I'm here to share some news: This story has been added to the Slash category over on A Drop of Romeo!
Here's your review:
Meet Ben. Meet his girlfriend, Bridgette. Meet Dave, Bridgette’s ex. Result: an incredibly original story that you wish you were creative enough to have thought of. However, Thornton irrefutably does a better job than anyone could have ever done. Her story is wonderfully written, with its strengths mainly lying in its well-rounded characterization and compelling dialogue. It is literally impossible for someone to not grin madly whilst reading each chapter. What’s more it’s written in such a simple and straightforward way that makes it easy and enjoyable to read.
But don’t let this fool you. Chill Pill can initially appear like a light story but it also has a stronger storyline: the detoxing of drug addict. This situation makes the story realistic which creates a greater appeal – accuracy is what you what to find in every single story in order to make it somewhat relatable. Thornton clearly realized this and executed this part of the plot perfectly.
Do I really need to say that this is a story everyone should read or is it obvious enough?
| rosieroo 11/12/12 . chapter 9
I really like this so far! It's interesting how you've just focused on the one kind of 'scene' and spread it out over so many chapters. I love Dave's bluntness!
| Guest 7/4/12 . chapter 9
Woohoo...an update. :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
| einekleineschreiberin 7/3/12 . chapter 9
This is great. Keep up the good work :-)
| plumblossom 7/2/12 . chapter 9
Oh nice, nice, an update of Chill Pill. And a really interesting backstory. I wasn't expecting such a vulnerable Dave, but I should have been, considering what I did know about him.
I wonder what will settle Bridgette?
| NightMoon66 7/2/12 . chapter 9
Hot damn, you actually did. And "what a clusterfuck" indeed. Ben, Ben, shame on you! (waggling a finger) Although, I can't REALLY blame him. I actually like this trio of characters - which is kinda redundant because I'm reading the story aren't I? - and I'm interested in what comes next. Can't wait.
| Miyuki31393 7/2/12 . chapter 9
Thanks for the update! We learn a little about their past...
| morexforxme 10/17/11 . chapter 8
Gosh, I REALLY don't like Bridgette. She seems so... selfish. Which I suppose is unfair, since she's going through withdrawal and all that...
Anyway, update soon!
| morexforxme 10/17/11 . chapter 2
Really like the dialogue. Nice.
I really don't like Bridgette, by the way.
| morexforxme 10/17/11 . chapter 1
Wowowow. I haven't found a good slash story in aaaaaaaaaages. I do so hope you're one of the people who updates religiously (hint, hint)!
| Boosher 10/17/11 . chapter 8
I reay liked this chapter. Please update again soon!
| HeavensOnFire 10/16/11 . chapter 8
I haven't even read the chapter yet, and I'm already half crying/laughing. Oh god I'm so happy. I can't even began to describe my emotions as I went through my email on my phone and saw the title "Chill Pill" I thought I was going to die. I literally ran to my computer and was probably going to scream at it to start up faster.
Okay, just read it. Oh and excuse me for a second askdasjdalksdajlsd. I just had to do that. I'm completely and wholly OBSESSED with you. Every single chapter just puts me on the edge. Every single sentence. I'm so thankful that you were able to fit writing this in your busy college schedule! I'm sure that your professors are quite the piece of work. I'll keep rooting for you.