I like this one, but somehow I feel sort of lost in it. Like, i'm not too sure what's going on. The last two lines are really nice, though.

This one reads full of sorrow, yet beautiful to me. Well done. I loved these lines

And again the image in her brain won't go away. That image of your back as you walked out the door, the thoughts she had when she knew she wouldn't be hearing your voice anymore.

The sound of it saying goodbye without ever saying the words.

this is really cool. it's thought provoking. i kind of want to know more, but at the same time i don't, because this feels complete. it's super well written.

aww that's so sad! if this is a prologue i can't wait to read the story!