I quite like Zane and Cody. I love the nickname Sonic, that's so cute! Well written :)

xD I like thiss

It's so cute! I love Cody and Zane! I hope to read more about them! And this story had things that I didn't even know about! Great work buddy! As usual!

Oh this god. I really really liked this, it spoke to me on some volume. And don't worry about the writing, the pacing and tone is just fine for this type of story. If there's one thing I can't stand it's too much detail. Annoying little things... anyway, keep this up. And if you keep your mind alight in flames you shall burn, calm the fire in your mind to find whatever it is you're looking for.