|Reviews for The Key|
| Penmaster51 8/8/10 . chapter 1
This is quite beautiful! The rhyming seems to go in a nice and gentle flow and I quite like it ) The repeats of lines like "Because you saved me" and etc, don't seem to bother the flow of the song at all (I just notice in some lyrics, it does P) but it just seems to me, in the outro, it may be repeated one too much but then again, without it, really would the song be the same?
I don't think it would. So i'm going to say it's perfectly fine the way it is. It's a beautiful song, again (I like to repeat myself, haha- sometimes I'm such a hypocrite XD), and I'm adding it to my favorites )