its pretty sweet and i like it, but i found it a bit confusing when it would change POVs, maybe you could add a divider of some sort or something? other than that though it was great:).

I loved it!,I have to admit in the beginning it was a little blah like you were trying explain in the end it was was one big error I noticed, women in the 1800's didn't wear a bra and underwear, they wore corsets and underclothes.

The thing is; 1-2 centuries ago, it's common for young girls to marry older men because of financial/background reasons. And it's common for men to wait until they had a decent job/housing/whatever before they married a woman.

So really, no. Do your research first.