Wow the story was actually quite poetic despite its ridiculous premise. Very impressively written. Have you hottubbed in open before (sans the bikini, of course).

Wow. I don't know what to say.

You created such

an elegant setting, and

then pulled the rug out

from under it. I love when

that's done well, and I really

empathize: don't we

all do crazy things when our

parents aren't home?

Part of us, they shouldn't see.