Awesome, I love murder stories...

Very abstract, but that's the way I do like it. ]

Brilliantly intriguing persona. You characterise him well given the word count, but I cannot help but feel that the length is unfair to the content. A character as interesting as this one deserved greater exploration.

that's crazy as he talks to his reflection...

Almost sickening, but wonderful all the same. It is obvious the character is psychologically conflicted. But wonderful comparison, and the voice of your character is great, how he views the lake as something even dirtier than him, the murderer.

Scary, but wonderful.