the last stanza

GOLD

that should be a poem on it's own...LoVeD EVERY WORD. I think its a heartbreaking story but its still a poem that defies what I've read on fic press and goes into such character that I really don't see in a lot of poems. "and among ,the scent." that's the only fragment that I just don't get..but I think everything else is just so deep and so ... that it basically gives itself its own story C:

i think this one is my favorite thus far.

a great description of lustloveattractiondesireneed.

well done :)

i love reading collections.

and this doesn't disappoint.

it seems to have the carelessness of a pillowbook,

yet somehow it's all put together.

like a mish mash that i enjoy reading.

You told me it would be about a tree!