Omg this is amazing! I LOVE THE HARRY POTTER REFERENCES :DDDD Okay, calming down now xD

I usually don't like stories written in this format, but this one was actually really good. The narrator has an interesting voice, haha. The one thing I'd change is the last paragraph; in the first two sentences, it sort of takes away from the fun mood of the story. I think it would be fine with just the last sentence. :)

PS - Gryffindor forever! ;D

I really enjoyed your story. It definitely made me laugh at some points. One drawback fro me was the use of an emoticon. It completely yanked me out of the story and felt completely out of place.

Otherwise, excellent story.

So was this YOUR story or just a random thing that popped into your head? No matter what your answer is, I liked the style much. Hmm, this was different from my nerd camp.