Thanks for your review forever ago. Sorry it took me so long to return the favor.

"not quite in-like yet."... I didn't get the dash because if it was in love there wouldn't have been a dash

"in front seat rows."... in front row seats would make more sense I think

I liked the piece. I thought your descriptions were great. I also loved how you connected the current conversation to your past relationship. It flowed well into each other and wasn't confusing except in the beginning. I didn't get the writing back thing yet. It seemed to come out of nowhere. Like there should've been a bit more set up.

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Nice. I love the cup theroy. I tried it once. Like yesterday or something. Harder then I thought.

wow, I like this thought about love and impossible things. actually nothing's more impossible than being in love with.

The tenses are all outta whack. But if it's intentional, I'm too dense to see why.

This has a sweet sadness to it that's really touching. I liked it more than I expected, and as I sit here I like it more and more. :)