wow. that was amazing...

awesome story. seriously. (jeeze... i need to work on better adjectives... really. webster's here i come!) anyways, i really liked how you kept it sort of a mystery throughout the whole story and i thought it was so sweet how compassionate the boy was at the end. the lack of detail the character describes here is exactly what gives the whole situation the most detail, the way she describes her (i'm assuming it's a her) poor vision and lack of focus.

great story!