I don't know what May is saying no for... he's fit x

Yay you updated, you don't know how glad i was to find a new chapter! and this was probably one of my favorite chapters so far, we have Jason finally admitting to liking May, and we have May not yet admitting to liking Jason which always makes for lots of fun and cool banter. I say you keep this Isaac guy around for awhile, well i know he is only there for a week, but if the week happens in a lot of detail, it will be pretty cool. Number 1 because Isaac seems like a nice guy and its good for May to be with friends from back home who know her really well, and because its awesome to see Jason jealous, even though Isaac is just her best friend. I'm anxiously anticipating the next chapter please make it amazing as this one ). Take your time and update, but don't take too long.

I love this story muchos so you need to update :D Like, seriously, you really need to or I believe I may explode. Pretty please? This story is absolutely amazing and I already like Isaac ;D but he seems slightly gay - in a good way - a good gay-best-friend kind of way. Anyway, I shall stop being weird and bid you farewell. UPDATE! :D

OMG! This chapter (and the others before, since I haven't been reviewing) was awesome! I especially liked the "anime character" comment from Jason. It was way funny!

I have to say that I feel bad for Jason. I felt very bad for him when he tried to ask May out, and was totally serious about it, and she rejected him! I honestly almost cried. I hope May realizes that she likes Jason soon, because poor Jason is too adorable to be hurt like that.

Anyway, great chapter! I hope to see an update soon!

Great, great, great chapter! Yay! So Jason admits it! Now only May...

And we need to get rid of Logan so everyone can be happy...

yes! he likes her! and i am sooo exited to see what he does with his jelousy over the anime charecter. lol update soon :)

Oh yeah, I forgot she probably had friends from before the story started... I'm such a jerk...

Oh, and I was going through Gakuen Alice Fanfiction, and I ran across someone writing one that is pretty much word for word this story. www .fanfiction s/7209319/1/Devil_beside_you#

I have no idea if the link will show, hopefully it will because I put spaces, but if not, it's called Devil Beside You and it's in the Gakuen Alice fanfiction section... just thought I'd tell you, because I almost had a heart attack when I saw it...

Oh my gosh! I got butterfly's in my stomach the whole start of this story! Then Issac came into the picture and I'm scared there is a little competition. Ohh no!

I'm happy Jason knows he likes her now, but May is being just a little to headstrong for my liking! Grr!

Loving it anyway!

Love,

Emily

I only just picked up on your story now, but I love it. :)

And this was something you acknowledged in the author's note for chapter fourteen, but whatever. I'm actually a huge fan of big age gaps between people. Once, I tried writing a story about a fourteen-year-old dating a twenty-five-year-old. I just find something about it really romantic.

Anyway, I'm exhausted because it's two in the morning and I stayed up to get to the end of the story so far. I can't wait for another update. :)

aw so he finally admits it! yay! :D So CUTE! :D update soon ;)

Oooh so now there's another guy in the picture! :) Bring on Jason's jealousy :) But, I'm guessing that's going to make May more angry at him. Here's a suggestion (which you don't have to even consider if you don't want to by the way :p): maybe have Issac, Lisa, May, and Jason hang out together, and after Issac sees that Jason likes May, have him confront Jason about it. Or have Issac tell May that he can tell that Jason likes her, since he's her best friend she'd probably value his opinion and advice that she should give Jason a chance.

woot woot, i like ure story so far, ure a good author, i think jason and may are cute together, and it is fun to see jason get jealous but i like it better when the person who is making him jealous is actually a nice guy, leon seemed like a nice guy, but considering his history and the way he ditched her, you could tell he is an idiot, but a guy who is kind and sweet and perfect would totally be more worthy of jason's jealousy...i'll be happy if you update weekly and i'm looking forward to the next bit of the story, i have my standards, so a guy and a girl sharing the same room doesnt fly with me, much less the same bed, he should have done the gentlemanly thing and taken the couch ) i promise to review this chapter from here on out if you promise that these characters won't have sex, like i said i have my standards and its hard enough to find a wholesome book as it is and it would be really nice if this is one of those..it'll be very much appreciated, thanks you rock! D

Haha, nice job! I liked that Jason played a murderer in a horror movie It was a very original idea (I've never seen that happen in stories with movie stars/idols) And the cuddling was fan girl material (i.e. I squealed like a little kid)

Yay! i love how she thinks that she can leave it alone for one night. it's so cute because it's so obvious that they like each other. they act like a married couple! i can just see them as an old couple :D fighting over what cereal they want to get or something.

the age difference doesn't bother me at all. idk why it would be bothersome... i mean thy're only a few years apart.

OH! one more thing... it's good that they didnt kiss... i think anyway. makes the story more realistic.

great story! update soon!

I loved it! Update soon!