|Reviews for Anton sitting in the Doorway|
| no.peace.los.angeles 8/14/10 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I love the first stanza the best, and your phrasing is so nice in this ("like a thrill of wind," "in the marrow of his eyelashes"). Lovely. Keep writing! :)
| amavian 8/12/10 . chapter 1
amazing opening line. wow.