|Reviews for Midnight Drive|
| willshakespeare-immortalbard 9/6/11 . chapter 1
Whoa. Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa.
That was awesome! Very nice-very dark. :)
| Lula6791 2/19/11 . chapter 1
Oh my! This one shot is really good. One can feel the woman's pain and the man's fear, guilt and regret. The ending is just perfect. I like it.
| SomeRandomScribbles 2/16/11 . chapter 1
You build up tension really well in this. Usually I prefer numbers to be written out, but using only figures in this is actually quite effective :)
One thing: "Why won't he say something the woman thought to herself." - this needs either a comma or a question mark to seperate the thought from the actual narrative.
| radioactiveshnitzel 12/21/10 . chapter 1
This was intense!