|Reviews for Almost Lover|
| hehehaha94 12/6/10 . chapter 8
trey is nice.. ) but erm.. who's the person he said he missed.. hope you will update soon.. keep writing.
| beverlyamethyst16 12/5/10 . chapter 8
GREAT GREAT CHAPTER!
I love the plot :)
| DorkExpress 12/5/10 . chapter 7
It's either his sister or an old girlfriend... But, if it's the same girl he said was coming to see him then, why would he deny it, since they aren't something official or anything at all...
But then again, guys lie sometimes for no apparent reason...
| cheesy-romance-lover 11/28/10 . chapter 7
Well written story, unique story line, and interesting protagonist. Keep up the good work! Please update soon! :) (especially after leaving such a cliff hanger! :O)
| beverlyamethyst16 11/27/10 . chapter 7
lol, verry good chapter!
| Oedipa 11/27/10 . chapter 7
Having read all seven chapters in one sitting, I can say for sure I'm looking forward to chapter eight. It is so easy to let romances fall prey to cliches, but this story's got an original premise, original main characters (I really like how she's still carrying on a good relationship with her ex- it's written very realistically), original just about everything. Also, your descriptions of NYC seem just right (granted I've only been there a couple times so I might not be the best judge...but I remember the thing about how you can't see the stars).
Uh. I'm trying to think of some kind of criticism but I'm having a hard time. The only thing that really bothered me was the POV switches- the Trey's POV sections seem pretty random- but that's not a huge issue. Great story.
Also, your main character doesn't really strike me as overly easy. It's actually kind of refreshing to see a female character portrayed as being interested in sex rather than just romance.
| toolazy 11/27/10 . chapter 6
Hahaha so shameless of her to just hang out with him for free lunch.
| Whitney Carter 11/24/10 . chapter 2
Excellent way to start the story because her embarrassment is something we can all relate to (Plus, it’s funny :p) I wasn’t expecting an ex to emerge but you inserted him with ease and style, keeping the old tension that still obviously rests between them and overlaying it with an attempt to be okay with each other again. Very good!
| myxe 11/23/10 . chapter 6
"I like to leave a good impression after my hookups."-Ha, ha. That's just lovely, and the British creepy guy's a nice touch too. I grew up in England, so maybe I'm just biased. Oh, and Louis? Brilliant and original. She actually reminds me of a person I knew. Good job, and I hope you update soon.
| Bruhk 10/18/10 . chapter 5
Dissapointed in you! update i've been waiting . :(
| beverlyamethyst16 9/2/10 . chapter 5
:) I wonder when they'll meet again...
| I Can't Breathe 9/1/10 . chapter 5
I really liked how you set us up to believe one thing and end up doing something completely different.
| Katarina Wolffe 8/31/10 . chapter 4
I wonder if Jose knows any Rachmaninaff. Yes, I'm obsessed with Jose. And I love british accents too!
| Katarina Wolffe 8/31/10 . chapter 3
Jose is so right. Clasical music is so under appreciated! I personally like piano music - probably because I PLAY the piano, BUT... - but violin is good too! :) Go Jose in his infinite janitor-ness.
| HeyyyitsPickle 8/31/10 . chapter 5
So i find this story funny but cool :)
and just to let u know...I LOVE Chicken n Rice from Halal Stands. hahaha
Next time get Chicken over rice with hot sauce, white sauce, and pita bread...unless thats how u get it already? haha.
anywayss... love the story. update soon? ;)