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| Reviews for Almost Lover |
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   lovelymatthew 8/25/10 . chapter 4yay update! about the cliffhanger... did not see that one coming! but i think trey will give louise a chance seeing as she is obviously somewhat interested... but he will always be wondering what woulda/coulda/shoulda happened if the right girl had received and responded to his note and while louise will probably end up falling in love with him, there will always be pain in her heart because she will never be #1 in trey's eyes |
| beverlyamethyst16 8/25/10 . chapter 4 ha ha :) funny! |
| nothingXpersonal 8/24/10 . chapter 4 Awe wrong girl! Maybe she can help Trey find the girl he WAS looking for in exchange for a place to sleep (because personally I would know be afraid that people would watch me when I slept) and then they end up fallin in love:) that'd be cute! Update soon |
| MayaD 8/21/10 . chapter 3 AH! 1. boy watching her sleep - OH HELL NAW I want some more juicy details about creepy stalker boy. I hope he's delicious! :D 2. Donovan... I hope that... well really I hope there is a whole mess of drama :) I loved this bit with the hair and memory of kiss and errthang. :D excited for morree |
| Kate 8/20/10 . chapter 3 lol i'm not sure if i really like donovan that much. but other than that, i really like your story so far. update please! |
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees 8/20/10 . chapter 1 This is great, it's really capturing my attention, but (yup, there's a but. Here comes the grammar lesson! xP) next time, don't use fullout CAPS lock, because it's well, sorta incorrect to use it like that. If you want to emphasize stress, anger, etc. in a sentence or word, you put it on italics. And when you write numbers down, write it verbally. e.g: "I was at her house for 3 days" when it should be "I was at her house for three days". It's always like that when writing literature. Annoying at first, but incredibly crucial. Hopefully you take my advice! x3 |
| Rosedreamer101 8/20/10 . chapter 2 Oh its a lovely story ! Can I assume the "It's a date" was purposely added ? |
| lovelymatthew 8/18/10 . chapter 1 great story so far! can't wait for the next update! |
| beverlyamethyst16 8/18/10 . chapter 2 :) Please update! |
| Hey again 8/17/10 . chapter 2 yay you updated! love the way that this story is progressing so far. |
| MayaD 8/17/10 . chapter 2 i love the voice of the character. mom sounds like a total bitch. i'm enjoying this :D hope the next chap comes soon |
| noxonexhere 8/17/10 . chapter 2 Hahaha this story is pretty epic so far! I love the pouring rain and the janitor mopping away her puddles. Hm update. |
| Hey 8/15/10 . chapter 1 This is really good- write more! |
| DisturbingThePeace 8/14/10 . chapter 1 Your story is very intersting. I'm very curous to read more. ;) |
| florissant 8/14/10 . chapter 1 ) |
