i loved this. very cute and sad at the same time. good job :)

That was... good. No, it was beautiful. You're so amazing at this, Amy.

I can tell what's going on. Completely. It's just perfect, and I can TOTALLY see it... I actually feel as if I'm that girl watching and saying 'I'm done'.

I can also feel the pain of her, though. And I can feel the pain of him, trying to make her understand, and wanting nothing more but for her to love him again.

Why can't be as good at writing intense stuff as you? :)

Say no more, I love this!

OMFG. THIS IS SO CUTE AND SAD :( But I love the ending. It gives it a more...deep (?) feeling to it. It mad me cry. Which means you've acheived your goal (I think)