|Reviews for Fire|
| wo bu ai ni le 8/26/10 . chapter 1
This is an unusual form, and I quite enjoyed it. Each short line brings up an image that's both related and separate to the rest. I wonder whether poems like these take longer or shorter to write than traditional poetry; every word certainly works hard.
| TheFantabulousPandemonium 8/20/10 . chapter 1
I rather like this one. :3
The words can actually paint a picture in one's mind of a raging wild fire and life returning.
I encourage you to keep writing!
| Death by Reflection 8/20/10 . chapter 1
This is awesome. I love how you us the roman numerals to separate each...stanza. It's also really descriptive so you can really "see" the fire.
| Charming Dice 8/18/10 . chapter 1
Can't say I agree that fire doesn't destroy (it kills people , you know), but this was still well-written.
| kloun mannequin 8/17/10 . chapter 1
I like the part about the fires and their egos since it's as if it's something human cant't be control.