I really, really enjoyed it. I could totally understand the inner voices...I can't wait to read what happens next. muhahahaha!

Ohh, very nice! I'm liking this story, liking it alot. I love how you started to bring out the whole point of it throughout the chapter and near the end, even though it's still not specific. Very cute flashbacks inbetween as well!

A great story you got going here. Keep it up!

StarNight8