|Reviews for What?|
| somovingon 7/20/11 . chapter 1
I love it! It's really nice and sweet and funny! weeeee I love your stories! Keep them coming!
| bettypetite 8/16/10 . chapter 1
Hi , it's nice. Here're some points maybe you can make it better?
- The transition between scenes sometimes is a little unclear, from Mrs. Grimswald to Izzy. Like, I have to go back and reread it to catch up.
- One last thing, too many characters are introduced at once from very early. I find it a little hard to keep up.
However, the story is intriguing. I'd like to see how Em develops more confidence in herself and in her relationships.