|Reviews for Eric Olafson, NeoViking GC V|
| greenforests 8/18/10 . chapter 2
wow, an exciting chapter. I love reading about eric in your new style and i love midril.
| greenforests 8/18/10 . chapter 1
I thought I was dreaming when I saw that you updated. You are the greatest writer I have seen on this site and life has been very boring these past months withou new stories of eric. Please to update this story fast as it is so amazing that i never want to stop. x
| Gerhardt 8/18/10 . chapter 1
Great start! I look forward to reading more of this. I really like the idea of new vikings on a huge ice planet, sort of forming their own legends changed out of the old ones and living a life like their ancestors.
| Arv 8/17/10 . chapter 3
Chapters 1 thru 3:
Not quite my usual story interest but the author did a good job of keeping my attention and making me want to read the full story when it is finished. Natural human affinity for the underdog was expertly manipulated in setting the stage for this tale. Not sure that was planned by the author, but in any case it worked very well.
A few mis-wordings (example "are" for "area"), obviously not caught by spell checker, were a bit of a detraction. Proofreading could be improved to eliminate these hiccups.
All-in-all, a good read. I will be back later to see what the rest of the story feels like.
Thanks for the opportunity to critique.
| a99515 8/17/10 . chapter 3
This is so polished that it should be in a publishers hand. Way to go this is so awesome. I see that you will have a future in writting If you keep this up.
| Jirun 8/17/10 . chapter 3
something new from you. :)
Your new writing style is really good. Good explanation of characters, no "unnecessary" informations XD You know what I mean.
Some commas missing, but as I just read it no spelling mistakes.
So I only have to say.
Just go on writing that way.
Looking forward to new chapters.