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simpleplan13 11/28/10 . chapter 1I was slightly confused by the meaning here... was it your period or maybe a miscarriage? It was kind of confusing to me... Anyway the piece was really interesting. I liked how you went from the stained glass to the red blood. That was a nice transition and then to the color of the stockings. It worked well together. Nice last line as well. PS Check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (links in my profile!) |