|Reviews for les étoiles|
| YasuRan 9/6/10 . chapter 1
Nice. Reminds me of that swift sense of power described in those epic fantasy novels. Well, to the hero, at least :)
Plus, I thought the line about the little dipper was mighty adorable.
| simpleplan13 9/4/10 . chapter 1
I didn't like the repetition of I looked ahead. It didn't make sense to me.
Other than that I really liked the piece. All the mention of the constellations worked really well for me. I also liked the flow here with phrases that continued onto the next line like i am stronger and free. Great ending as well.
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