Nice. I like it a lot.

I don't think this is depressive or sad, I really think it's hopeful even if it's a lie. this poem just is like a sweet thought in a night.

Oh my juice! This is awesome. It's the exact kind of poem I love writing. Keep up the good work. )

I love it. It puts into words all the lost feelings I've had, all the saddened, unsure phases I've had to endure. It's nice to know someone else experiences it, too. The metaphors are spot on, and it's beautiful, in a strange way. I love the last two lines "A kind voice telling you that everything will be ok, even if it's a lie...", they're perfect. Well done, it obviously came straight from the heart. (: