Wow I liked how every phrase is powerful. Fantastic job on describing how wrecked a person can be on the inside :) I really like the line "My brother hides behind the weed" because it's so realistic and poetic in a perceptive sense. But my favourite part is when you described everything that was missed in the "dreamlike state."

Renana

P.S Thanks so much for adding my story to your favourites :) Glad you liked it!

wow, I don't know why but I felt some of lust as I read. anyway, it's dark and the feels are powerful.

cool poem