|Reviews for Gay Bash|
| CucumberHero343 12/30/12 . chapter 1
That was... I can't find words to describe myself. The words went together beautifully and the meaning got out, and it hurts. Thank you for sharing.
| Zafyra's 10/7/12 . chapter 1
I just couldn't pass my way without congratulating you for this, so beautiful poem.
I'm not a boy, i'm not gay and i don't personally know people who are gay. But i was affected by what you said.
You use only a few words for an important message. That's admirable.
I hope that some day, it would be normal to be gay, and that people would understand eac other and accept differences.
Thank you,:) and bye!
PS: sorry if my English is not understandable, i still learn it at school.
| CracksInTheConcrete 10/26/11 . chapter 1
The words above are what i said whan i read this.
Thank you. Ive had a really tough day with harrassment because im bisexual (possibly full-out lesbian)and i needed something that told me someone else understood.
here's the thing; to anyone who sees the world through rose-colored glass, this shit really does happen. ive been abused a few ways because of my sexuality-verbally, mostly, but ive had guys shove their dicks at me to try to get me to like them obly, and ive been beat up a couple of times. Im so sick of hearing the school neo-nazis scream "kill the fags" that i was almost ready to end it all.
is it okay if i read this for my school's gay-straight alliance? i finally got one going and i think this will really help us to know were not the only ones. we know were not, of course, but its still nice to know that were not the only ones with violent bigots who go to our school.
| atasfan16 10/16/11 . chapter 1
I really fricken love this poem. It's really sad. People really shouldn't judge others like that it's terrible. Love is Love 3
| Anna 8/30/11 . chapter 1
Thank you for writing something both meaningful and true. Homophobia is often a hard subject to breach to those who are close minded. I hope that someone who is ignorant finds this and is awakened by your beautiful work. Thank you sharing this,
Wishing you all the best,
| Anonymous Heart 8/10/11 . chapter 1
THAT WAS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL! But I suggest a better summary
| Jessica 6/21/11 . chapter 1
Not only is this an eye opener about homophobia. I read it and i was like Holy Cr*p! This has to be the BEST poem i have ever read! The rhyming, the plot, EVERYTHING. It was outstanding! Absolutely breath taking. You hold a lot of talent!
| Luna Carn 6/4/11 . chapter 1
| Guest 5/24/11 . chapter 1
Well, God does hate gays. I have no problem with it, but I outright don't support Gay Rights.
Gays will burn in Hell, don't deny it, read an effing bible.
| Jewls 12/17/10 . chapter 1
I like this but its really sad how stuff like this happens also to the person who was upset about the other comment god doesnt hate anyone don't tell someone that they should kill themself even if they are being an ass.
| Liz 10/18/10 . chapter 1
To the lovely character who left this comment:
"ha ha your gay ** me up stick your fingers up my dick
to improv it put some action you know but sex"
God hates you. He wants you to go jump off of the nearest bridge. What exactly possesses you to be such a leech on society? You're what's wrong with the world. Had your mother known what a dreadful person you'd become, she'd have had an abortion.
I reiterate: Do the world a favor. Go kill yourself.
| Curious 10/8/10 . chapter 1
This one has very good rhyming. It's really, really good.
| Black Sparrow 8/26/10 . chapter 1
When things like this happen, I arch up so much. I hate the unfairness and inequality. If anyone touches any of my gay friends I swear to God ... :
| HighOnBrokenWings 8/22/10 . chapter 1
That's so sad. An eye opener to any homophobe.
| The Un-great-ful 8/22/10 . chapter 1
Perhaps it is best to keep the whole gay thing under wraps when you're still at school, my best friend Steve did, I didn't know he was gay until he was 19 and in university, been mates since we were little kids. There's no crueller and more mindless group than school children, they'll single you out for anything they can and transfer their own miseries to you.
Good poem, sad subject.