|Reviews for Art Criticism|
| chowdizzle 6/1/12 . chapter 24
So I was creeping your tumblr and I saw that you posted some excerpts of a sekwel (ignore the bad spelling.. I'm on my phone and I spilled some soy sauce on it so now that letter doesn't work so I'm trying to write it somewhat phonetically). Anyways pls do write a sekwel I love these characters so much that I want more of them!
| Catalina 5/4/12 . chapter 20
Oh my god this os literally one of the best pieces of slash fiction on fictionpress. I just keep coming back to it again and again and again. Actually, I do that with most of your stories. I have no idea why I haven't reviewed before actually. Why isn't there a sequel? I'd love to see more James and Turkish, though to be honest I can see them not working out eventually. Like, it seems like they'd have a great time for a few years but ultimately end up going different places. Maybe I'm completely wrong, I dunno!
I was really bored in math class the other day and was talking to a friend who also read it and we agreed that James and Peter should run off together and leave Arie and Turkish all pretty and upset and in need of comfort. But now that I think on it that's a terrible idea. Anyways, just wanted to say you're extremely talented and thanks for producing a great piece of writing!
P.S. You know that's not what Invisible Cities is about, right? All of the stories are about Venice. I couldn't tell if you were doing something REALLY clever with what Turkish said or if you just didn't understand.
| Sayure 5/3/12 . chapter 24
Wow thanks, YaY my " 1st finished story" and what a good one. I'm in a happy mood and it's totaly because of you, and the Muslim thing, totaly with you even if I have a hard time to pronounce the name until I knew it's an arabic name. And the idea to use a muslim character is a so fearless move and a so good one. Thanks again.
| Junnie 4/2/12 . chapter 24
Amazing,I absolutely loved it. Read it all in one day :)
| bbbee 4/1/12 . chapter 24
*sigh* really good story. I was hoping to be there for James' first ILY, but I can live with this too ;)
Very nice story. Thanks for sharing.
| jellyxbeans 1/18/12 . chapter 24
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I literally only created my account so that I could tell you that I love this story. It's so sweet and sexy and I love it so much that I don't even get annoyed by the (extremely minor) grammar mishaps, which is saying a lot for me. Thank you for writing Art Criticism, I really enjoy it every time I read it.
| Dark Lynnette 1/17/12 . chapter 24
Fabooolous! I enjoyed his story from start to finish! Thanks.
| Happily Ever After All 1/16/12 . chapter 24
I really enjoyed reading this story! I think it is a great portrayal of a modern gay romance. I think James is a good mix of insecurities and strength. And I really like Yusef's personality. Kudos!
| runaway sheet 1/8/12 . chapter 24
Aww, this story was so sweet and mature. I usually dislike domestic verses but this one was so airtight drama :)
I love Turkish and All the elements of Iranian culture you added. Especially food. Made it seem so modern fic, like let's get multicultural but oh look, very nicely done so it comes off as 100% normal.
Is it weird that I want to put James and Yusef in a snowglobe and hang on tree at Christmas? You probably get plenty of reviews confessing undying love for your characters, so I'll assume it's not that weird.
Any chance of another Drabble with these characters?
| BlackNoSugar 12/29/11 . chapter 24
This was a great story! I really like your writing style... Kinda reminds me of Chuck Palahniuk actually ;) (And anyone who knows a thing about me knows I absolutely love him, so that's a good thing coming from my mouth XD)
And you really knew what you were talking about! You've got great knowledge of the photographers! and you wrote Andy Warhol and not 'warhole' like too many people... So yeah. I fucking loved this! You can expect me stalking you in the future :)
| lmnop 12/20/11 . chapter 24
Very nice. Enjoyed reading this tremendously.
| lostbookandpen 11/22/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story especially around the mid part. I was a bit distracted in the beginning 'cause James felt a little too like me but it ruled. Thank you for writing this.
| S.H. Marr 10/26/11 . chapter 24
I love this. It's so cute. And the characters are really well developed and consistent. And it's well written. And I'm starting a lot of sentences with "and".
The characters are wonderful. It would be lovely to see them again in something. I'm not sure what, though, because they could do pretty much anything and amuse me.
| foreveran 10/24/11 . chapter 24
Man this was good
I hated Turkish at first because of how James keep talking about him in his thoughts
but trukish is so sweet and they are such a nice couple
Your a really good writer thanks for a wonderful story :)
| foreveran 10/24/11 . chapter 17
aww his talk with his mom was nice at the end
and Turkish is very calm and understanding
James just needs to trust people then he will be ok :)