I love your style of poetry, blank and free verse, and I love the words you use. Beautifully crafted and as always an interesting and worth-while read. Great job.

its an interesting thought being handfasted to a moment, being immersed and engaged in the story but also having that option to break away, to leave if the "friendship" or the story doesn't suit.

I know I'm missing some of the meaning of the poem, but that is the part that captured my attention. Great work as always.

A lot of implications strew here, some of them all the more disturbing for their contrast to the seemingly innocent scene imagined.

I thought the girl might have been talking to an imaginary friend, then if she was the unreal one towards the end. But the again, I suppose 'unreal' has many connotations here. As usual, I loved reading this. It's like a chain of unformed thoughts yet all linked by a theme that materializes gradually.

Wonderful work, once again :)