This reminds me of my own Domme/Subbie relationship. A year and 2 months thus far :) really enjoyed this, you understood it perfectly.

Intruiging opening: not at all cliche, as most attempts at d/s relationship stories are.

Only criticism is how the last line ties into the plot and conects to the title. There is no clear point to it. Is it being sacastic? And it is never revisited in the later chapters.

a bit to intense for me.