|Reviews for Caveo of Mortalitas|
| Belladonna Snow 8/31/10 . chapter 1
Hm, interesting idea about what happens afterward. It seemed a little fatalistic to me however. Once she realized that she couldn't change her husbands mind she seemed to give into the idea of death without much fight left in here, instead of trying maybe an alternet route to take them to school or whenever she left.
However, I did like the way this was written. I hear...I see...I feel..., it really made the story stronger with your style. I did enjoy your work, as always. Looking forward to your next stroke of brilliance :).
| Riki-Biki 8/31/10 . chapter 1
Interesting... though its quiet sad...
| ColonialTimesGirl 8/31/10 . chapter 1
Oh, interesting! xD Me wants more!