Very well written, I enjoy the concept behind it. If only more people would delve into and fix what is wrong as opposed to simply refusing it.

I really like this! I had been meaning to do something very similar for years, but you did better than I ever could have. It reminds me of Barbara Taylor Bradford's BEING ELIZABETH.

Now if only you could show Edmund and his romance with the two "naughty" sisters in a more positive light!