This sounds quite interesting...can't wait to read more :)

Interestingly good first chapter(:

I love the concept! Sort of like...everyday magic in a way. Anticipating the rest!

EXCITED EXCITED EXCITED! You had me at Virtual reality!

I seriosuly cannot get enough of your stories. Can't wait to see how the next chap! _

-Liz :D

If I mispelled anyhting in my review or wasnt writted well its because I just got my wisdom teeth out and the drugsd are meaking me loopy lol! _

im sticking with you!

its short, and i know you will be pissed off with me, but there a mistake at the beginning..."sitting next to you PEAKING" it peeking. but dont mind me seriously!

i cant wait to read the first chapter, since Meoldy sounds a lot like myself, and i really want to find what happens next.

your writing here, proves that you have taken a big step forward, for the good.

keep on writing!

Forever with You,

Fafa