Did you seriously leave us with a CLIFFHANGER? For several months?! I realize thou have a life outside of this but please, i'm dying to know what's next!

I'll cry if you don't add more to the story!

Please come back and update! You MUST return to fp! This is such a brilliant start to the story. I love love love the plot and I want to read more!
I know I'm demanding but its only because you're an awesome writer and then you go and leave me alone with no more chapters :( I can't live like that!

Please? :)

I love this story! Please please. Please update soon! You can't leave us hanging with the cliff hanger D: ! XD

Oooh my gosh, girl. You musst update! I wish I had found this sooner! I just found this today and read it all in one sitting! Amazing, suspenseful, and soo good! I'm so happy that Asher found out, but I'm dying to know more! And I love Asher, but he seems kind of secretive, too; realllly want to know what that's about! Super excited to find out more, and reeeally hope you update soon! :D

update

Looks very good. More please and soon.

WHERES THE PART YOU BEEN DYING TO WRITE? HUH? I DONT SEE IT RYAN. I THOUGHT THE BALL WAS ROLLING. Please? I want more gun kink! PLEASE? IF YOUR NOT GONNA FINISH THEN TELL ME HOW IT ENDS. ARGHWHKFN. I will send you candy. Update and I send you candy. Do you want candy? :]

SO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN THIS REALLY COOL STORY!

This story is pretty good though the assassin meeting the Secretary of Defense directly is a bit laughable because politicians rarely implicate themselves though that can be passed off because Harley seems like an irregular choice for a killer.

I think my real problem with this story is Asher, he comes across as childish and annoying and his character flaws make him less loveable. Maybe its because you have him portrayed as immature and naive but I'm left to wonder what Harley sees in Asher.

I would dearly love to see this continued :)

Oh my gosh.

I love you. Please marry me :U

Your stories are amazing. You are amazing. How you make everything adorable and realistic at the same time is amazing.

update! you had to leave it with a cliffhanger? i can't wait your story is sooo good

yay gunplay it makes it sound more interesting

Asher seems so cute, though I am surprised he didn't just find Harley's job an even sexier version of a spy. I'm guessing Asher's either been kidnapped by this biowarfare CEO guy or Powell has taken matters into his own hands to keep the goverment's action secret.

Really hope to see more of this soon!

June

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