Hey! Well, to be honest, the use of second person doesn't really fit this well. This doesn't relate to me, and probably doesn't relate to others. But if you make it a personal poem, it fits better. Also, there is no steady rhythm or formal pattern, which makes it a little choppy. Of course, formality is optional, but it helps. Great concept - especially with the time stamps. Good lesson for people!

I like this. I won't lie, I saw the title and saw this going somewhere completely different, but I enjoyed this. It shows the growth of character, the joys of success.

I love this! I know the frustration of composing and how it's all worth it in the end.

The way you describe the whole composing process really strikes a chord.

Lovely work, even if it's describing how utterly frustrating composing is. (frustrating and worth it)

it's like a diary, that's interesting.