I can really feel the pain of the girl in this poem, how it doesn't matter to her wether they notice it or not because she's just so controlled by the ED that in the end that's all that matters to her. You should read my poem "Ana Sitting On My Shoulder" as it also displays the obsession Ana creates.

I loved this one.

''And that he'll know she's pure and clean'' I loved that line. It made me feel like I know her.

Also, I think the missed a word here ''What if the girls at school see at last that she HAS all the good things that go along with having a perfect concave abdomen?'' You're missing the verb. But apart from that, it was great.

Loved the end. :)

the picture of that girl, made me think about death.

good poem.